Ever notice how fantasy characters have the same habits in a lot of books? I have, and I made a list. Because I like lists.
Note: please don’t take this post too seriously. I don’t mind these things that much. I think it’s amusing more than anything else (except for #1, #2, and #10. Those need to stop).
#1 Sensing things
The classic “I’ve got a bad feeling about this” scenario. George Lucas isn’t the only perpetrator. These characters sense everything three paragraphs before it happens. Meanwhile, I’m lucky if I sense my alarm going off in the morning.
#2 Eating bread, cheese, and apples
I get it. There aren’t a lot of foods that keep well during a long journey. But still…give the poor guy a bag of trail mix, at least (also…bread doesn’t stay fresh very long. And wouldn’t cheese stink up the whole travel pack?).
#3 Setting a watch at night
If you’ve got an assassin on your tail, setting a watch makes perfect sense. But fantasy travel buddies often “volunteer to take first watch” regardless of the danger level. Someone’s gotta keep the bears away, right? Should’ve kept the cheese in a tupperware…
#4 Drawing swords
If I had a dollar for every time a character “drew his sword” I’d quit one of my part-time jobs. I get it, okay? Drawing your sword makes you feel cool and threatening. Suggestion: save yourself the time and just punch the guy.
#5 Avoiding roads
Unless you’ve got Ringwraiths hunting you down, what’s the worst that could happen? A toll booth? Is dodging hypothetical bandits really worth all the briars and wet feet? Come on. If you do run into bandits, just draw your sword. Or punch. You should have set that watch, Jimmy.
#6 Running into bandits
Sorry. But there’s gotta be more ways to give your hero trouble before the real action starts. Have you tried bears? Bears are stinking terrifying. I’ll take bandits over bears any day of the week.
#7 Blasting things
I don’t like obscenities in fiction. Honestly, it just cheapens the prose for me. On the other hand, substituting every single moment of explicit frustration for ‘blast it!’ doesn’t really work either. Unless it involves bears and dynamite. In that case, by all means, blast them.
#8 Scanning treelines (or other landscape features)
He scanned the treeline. He scanned the ridge. She scanned the beach. They scanned the road. He scanned his passport. Seriously, can you stop that? Blast your scanning! There are easier ways to find bears.
#9 Holding council meetings
Because that’s the best way to make urgent decisions (bonus points if it takes an agonizingly long chapter of dialog). Once I even read a chapter about a council of bears. Not even joking. (The book was Father of Dragons, by L.B. Graham. A council of bears! Bless that man.)
#10 Speed-learning skills
Whether your protagonist has to learn how to ride a horse, fight with a sword, punch bandits, scan treelines, or blast bears and their councils, she’ll probably do it on the road (or off it, because bandits and bears), under the sage guidance of some old fart, and it’ll only take her a week or two to master the practice.
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I’ll be sure to remember these when I’m writing. With each one I was like, yeahh that’s a good point. Great post!
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Thanks! I wouldn’t sweat it too much. A few of them have wormed their way into my books already…oops 😛
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Have I mentioned that I love this blog? Because, blast it, I love this blog! Anyone who doesn’t deserves to have a sword drawn on them.
Anyway, such an awesome post! Had me laughing the entire time. Bravo!
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Thanks Hannah ^_^
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Hahaha oh my gosh these are perfect!! Guilty of a few of them myself, I’m afraid… looking for ways around tropes always makes for much more interesting stories 🙂
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That makes two of us 😀
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Lol, speed-learning skills are so true!
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Reblogged this on Allison the Writer and commented:
As someone whose backpack smelled like a cheese sandwich for months after school let out, I can say with certainty that this post raises some excellent points. 😀
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I’m going to use “dagnabit” instead. Everyone who is bad will be called a “varmint” and we’ll be good to go! 😉
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Ahah, funny and accurate article. I would also add: magic systems that follow no rule whatsoever and the Chosen One cliché.
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I’m very unfamiliar with all these things because I don’t often read fantasy xD
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Bears. Beets. Bandits. (Blast it!)
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Any chance you could give me pointers on quicker ways to find bears than scanning the treeline? practically speaking.
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Take bacon and don’t make too much noise. They say that works.
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Ah. In the spirit of avoiding said bears, though?
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Ah. In that case, scanning from safe distance is probably the best choice, I’m afraid.
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Oh well. Thank you.
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I might need to bookmark this one for bad days when I need a good laugh.
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Excellent! ;D
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